CURTAINS - My First Attempt At Dethroning Pablo Neruda :-)
. Here's something I wrote a few weeks ago...
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A month, the world watched this game
So absurdly simple in name
Just a nine inch ball, to tame
Creating magic all the same
Heroes from yonder, they all came
Coveting glory and enduring fame
The group contests, none remembers
The group contests, none remembers
Too many teams merely made up the numbers
Flashed their brilliance, those capable Africans
Gave their hearts out, those intrepid Asians
But flashes never won matches
And onward marched the regular batches
Each game became too close to call
Each game became too close to call
But then, someone always has to fall
Now the script began to turn awry
The favourites were made to look sorry
As Zidane started connecting his passes
Bookies were ruing over their losses
When Rooney shoved and Beckham cried
When Rooney shoved and Beckham cried
England had very well died
They displayed none of their valiance
Not once justifying their bank balance
As for the WAGs
'Twas time to pack their bags
While the Latino samba lacked it's beat
While the Latino samba lacked it's beat
The host came third, no mean feat
And the Portugese stood up to fight
All crashing out when the going got tight
Finally, the French clashed with the Italians
Each dazzled us with their brilliance
Deservedly lifted the trophy, did Cannavaro
Deservedly lifted the trophy, did Cannavaro
The Azzuris rarely left a gap, however narrow
For Les Bleus, the tidings looked rosy
Before things turned a little messy
Some untypable muttered by Matterazzi
Made ZiZou go a wee bit crazy
That made the referee get busy
That made the referee get busy
And Champs d' Elysees went all hushy
It indeed was a great shame
But the great man has only himself to blame
Forgive himself, he would never
For he could've been the greatest ever!
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. An appreciative word or two would mean the world to me.. A derisive critique would mean even more..
17 Comments:
At Friday, 18 August, 2006, VAC said…
Hey great work da. Brought back memories of those 30 days when everybody breathed football.. The rhyming words add sheen to this poetry.. Language is Simple yet profound is the impact..
Keep them coming by the loads man.. Looking forward to many such pieces...
But, one different opinion.. Zizou is still the greatest of the present era..
At Friday, 18 August, 2006, asiftherock said…
man awesome blog... very creative dude.... WOW!!!!!!
At Saturday, 19 August, 2006, Livewire said…
derision? well no. i dont have the stance to be derisive about a poem on football!
nice work dude :)
At Saturday, 19 August, 2006, Shankar Thirunakkarasu said…
scene da.... great work mate
At Saturday, 19 August, 2006, Anonymous said…
dai yaroda patta copy aditcha :)....jus kiddin...semaya irukku da...good try...tough competition to vijay and priya i believe...vaazhga AMI i am not sure if they are making good programmers but they are definitely making good poets...;)
At Saturday, 19 August, 2006, Anonymous said…
scene work da...
At Saturday, 19 August, 2006, Anonymous said…
good one da...btw..can't enjoy the crux with my knowledge of Fussball.
At Saturday, 19 August, 2006, Anonymous said…
i liked it. simple style,nice rhyme.
zizou had himself to blame. but tat won't make him less great.
At Saturday, 19 August, 2006, Srinivasan said…
No mention abt killer penalties and also missed mentioning some important players...................
he he jus kidding da.
gr8 poem
At Saturday, 19 August, 2006, Anonymous said…
wt wre u doin till aug 11th da?
At Saturday, 19 August, 2006, Anonymous said…
really good one da..and replace aug 11 by the date wen u wrote it..
At Sunday, 20 August, 2006, Rajan said…
dei.. kalakite..
really showcases your poetic talent while offering me an insight into football.. cool dude.
At Sunday, 20 August, 2006, Arvind said…
may be im the derisive critique???...
http://mars-strangerinblack.blogspot.com/2006/07/sorcerers-or-soccerers.html
;) anyways great work!
At Monday, 21 August, 2006, Anonymous said…
super machi. nice work considering it is the first time.
At Wednesday, 23 August, 2006, Anonymous said…
Great work da.....
At Tuesday, 21 November, 2006, Anonymous said…
hey y no updates long time??
At Tuesday, 27 March, 2007, Robin said…
Dude,
Nice post & poem... And thanks for the link to my blog..
- Robin
http://robinsamuel.blogspot.com
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